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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。
Last week we invited the professor of psycholody Kelly Lam to talk about what Chinese student think about sharing.Although Chinese students may feel happy or sad,they always be not willing to share their thoughts and in my opinons,it is not right.Because nowadays,the society is developing fastly so we must follow its step and it's of importance to learn sharing.Therefore,if we know how to share,we can live better.
