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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(25):父母在子女教育方面所起的作用

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请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
1. 作文的主题必须围绕“父母在子女教育方面所起的作用”;
2. 按照作文的主题范围要求,从阅读文章中选择一个表达原文作者观点的句子,作为你作文的主题句;首先简要概述原文作者对这一主题的论述,然后发表你自己的看法,或通过实际的例证表述你的看法。
3. 作文必须主题明确,结构合理,内容连贯,语言规范。

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拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用。

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Parents are the initial teachers of their children, therefore, their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, have an important effect on children’s character-training and future development. Numerous parents might take fostering excellent children as their source of happiness and spiritual contentment. What I acquire from my father is to be big at heart, cherish great ambition and rely on honest hard work to strike for those cherish-but-failed dreams. And my mother also teaches me to unite peers, respect the old, make a clear distinction between right and wrong. In closing,parenting will always have many roles to play in shaping children’s character, establishing their life outlook and influencing their destinies. My firm stand is that all parents will take efforts and take time to influence their children positively. After all, blood is thick than water.

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