2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

My view on online shopping Nowadays, shopping online has become a general behaviour,Expecially is the younger.They buy most of their things on the Internet. From my point of view, everything has two coins. Though shopping online is very convenient for us, like saving our time，reducing our fees to buy the products, havng more choice to select our most favourite products. It also has its shortcoming,such as the quality problem, the safe problem, the risk peoblem andso on. As far as I am concern, in order to buy pleased products, the firstof all, we should improve our safe awareness, secondly, we must select the products more carefully,and the last but not least, we shuld learn some shopping skills.