运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Dear , I'm so glad to receive you letter. And It's exciting to know that you and your parents will spend the Mid-autumn Day in China. The Mid-autumn Day has a long history. It's a traditional festivel in China. We Family have dinner together on that day. And we also eat mooncakes. After dinner, we ususlly enjoy the moonlight outside. As for the moon, there's a legand. It is said that there's a fairy living alone on the moon. Some of us imagine that there's rabbit as well. Hope you visit soon. Yours sincerely...