2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

A strong will. If you want to succeed, you must get a strong will. Nothing succeeds without a strong will. A strong will is important, so you will insist on it. If you want to do and complete something, your will must be strong. For example, you want to communicate with British, so you have to learn to English every day. Or you don't know what they are talking about. If you study English today, and play game tomorrow. I believe that you aren't successful. A strong will is all right, so please keep it. You are successful.