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be carefull with your money nowsdays,it's common to see parents spent money for their children without restraint. They clamoring that they can't make their children lose in the start point.As a result,most people,especially young adults have no concept about saving money. In my opinion,young children should learn to be careful about money. firstly, thrifty as a traditional virtues for chinese people has been cherished thousands of years by our ancester and we should follow their steps.