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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,高级词汇的希望能更熟练一些
Be careful with your money Nowsdays,it's common to see parents spent money for their children without restraint. They clamoring that they can't make their children lose in the start point.As a result,most people,especially young adults have no concept about saving money. In my opinion,young children should learn to be careful about money. FIrstly, thrifty as a traditional virtue for Chinese people has been cherished thousands of years by our ancester and we should follow their steps.