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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者词汇量积累需要继续努力,尤其高级词汇还有很大提升空间,另外拼写检查还需加强。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,comunication is signification to our daliy life.However,with the improvement of our technology and economy,a great number of people spend little time in expressing themselves to their families and friends.Instead,they are obsessed by the computers and smartphones or busy in earning for living. Humand being are social animals which reminds us of communicating with others to make the sociey harmonious and the life beautiful.First of all,comunication can strength our friendship after learning about eachother and care about eachother .Besides,it is a wonderful way to relax ourselveso,as we can feel the happiness and warm through communicate.Last but not least,after communication ,we can compared to others to know about some informations served to our personal development rather than work closed your door,we require to open our mind to keep pace with the times and keep move and forward. In a word ,it is nesessary for us to put down your phone and computer ,or squeeze some time from your job simply to communicate to your families and friends.you will find the life meaningful and interesting by it .

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