语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练使用了一些长难句;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
some people believe parents are best teacher for there children , but will be taken place by teacher after children go to school however , I believe parents are always to become best teacher for children first , children always imitate there parents from broth so the parents influences on children is great, for example researcher said that parents expression can influences the growth of their children character it parents aways smell and watching to their children while he is playing the child confidence will be greater than other child whose parents always leave him alone at home second , parents also the beat teacher for children in emotional area if children have felling oppression or frustrated in school he always not talk to their teacher , at same time , parents can help him and child are also willing to tell his inner feeling to his parents third , although child get many knowledge from teacher basic skills in this whole life are come from his parents For example, our basic language skill basic realize and even skill and even basic sport skill are all acquired from parents because of this basic skill patents teacher their child the influences of parents will follow the child 's whole life All in word , the effect parents take on the child's education process is greater than any teachers in school they are the best teacher