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注意:字数:100左右。可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。
Nowadays,with the booming of economy,online shopping is a fashion way that has been accepted by many people especially among the teenagers.In my opinion,online shopping own a lot of benefits,but it also can cause lots of problems.For example,we may pay the fee wrongly online because of our carelessness or get a wrong good because of the seller's carelessness and it will make us get into trouble.So if you like online shopping,you should know the whole processes about buying and be careful when you pay for your thing.