高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；文中词汇表达丰富度要提升，可是单词拼写错误稍多。

in the over year,there is tree aroud my contryside. the fish play in the river,the house wes simple and the stree wes very X 。people lived pooring as well as word hearting. but now,the top building every where,so much car both of big or small are driving in the stree. the environment more and more worsen because of the industry's devolement.