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When you or hear something, will you say its right or its wrong? Yes,many person will do it. But I think that is unwise.Such as when you saw a man talking loudly with a woman,your feeling is uncomfortable.Or that woman must be doing something wrong.It Is right what you see?In fact,they are act in practice.So we don't judge a person's behavior when you saw at once.It can be bring something wrong infromations and will affect a person's impression of you.We should be feel with your heart,listening carefully.To believe in things themselves,rather than surface. Let's be a man of indenpent thinking,Not a timesever.
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