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Sometimes,when you see or hear something, do you think its right or wrong? Yes,many persons will do so. But I think that is unwise.Such as when you saw a man talking loudly with a woman,your feeling is uncomfortable.Or that woman must be doing something wrong.It Is right what you see?In fact,they are act in practice.So we don't judge a person's behavior when you saw at once.It can bring something wrong informations and will affect a person's impression of you.We need to feel the heart,listening carefully.To believe in things themselves,rather than surface. Let's be a man of independent thinking,not a timesever.
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