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To put all eggs in one basket is a wise choice? Have you ever thought about this question? One day,I saw my mother put all eggs in one basket when she came back.Mum,why do you put all eggs in one basket? Are you not afraid all fell off? No,I never think so.Suddenly,I thought about invest.If you are an invenstors would you put the money on the same thing?Just like my mother? It takes a risk when you are do it. Recently,the stock market fell faster,many persons suffered from the loss or even suicide. Because they put all money in the stock,when it fell,they fell.It is unwise choice.NO matter how,we should not be all property investment going out.We need to plan what we will do. In short, anything take a risk when you do it, and you need to keep our head clear.Hold your horses.