2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

To put all eggs in one basket is a wise choice? Have you ever thought about this question? One day,I saw my mother put all eggs in one basket when she came back.Mum,why do you put all eggs in one basket? Are you not afraid all fell off? No,I never think so.Suddenly,I thought about invest.If you are an investors would you put the money on the same thing？Just like my mother? It takes a risk when you do it. Recently,the stock market fell faster,many peoples suffered from the loss or even suicide. Because they put all money in the stock,when it fell,they fell.It is an unwise choice.NO matter how,we should not be all property investment going out.We need to plan what we will do. All in all, anything takes a risk when you do it, and you need to keep our heads clear.Hold your horses.