正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes. My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy, because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou.