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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；用词丰富，高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间。
Attitudes towards setbacks In the drawing there's a fallen bottle contained with milk,and some milk spilted out.Standing near the bottle are two men who helding opposite attitudes,the negative one said "it's all over" while the optimisstic one said "so lucky there's some milk left".The extended meaning of this drawing is profounding and inspiring. Life has its ups and downs,no one can avoid all obstacles.But different people's attitudes towards obstacles can be so different. Maybe you all heard the story of Edison,the light inventor.He tried hundreds of times before he find the optimal material for light,which means he failed hundreds of times before he succeeded.He saw every failure as success,"oh,i successfully find another material not suitable" ,how optimistic he was!What if he just lost faith and became upset?He will give up trials,let it go and never made it. To sum up,attitudes toward life is significant to all of us.Life is not easy,the road to happiness is always full of hurdles.We need a positive attitude to conquer these problems and ultimately achieve the summit of success.
