字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
Attitudes towards setbacks In the drawing there's a bottle of spilled milk.Standing near the bottle are two men who helding opposite attitudes,the pessimistic one said "it's all over" while the optimistic one said "so lucky there's some milk left".The extended meaning of this drawing is profound and inspiring. Life has its ups and downs,and no one can avoid all the obstacles.Nevertheless,different people's attitudes towards obstacles can be so different. Maybe you already heard the story of Edison,inventor of the electric light.He tried hundreds of times before he found the optimal material for light,which means he failed hundreds of times before he succeeded.He regarded every failure as success."Oh,I successfully find another material which is not suitable",he said.How optimistic he was!What if he just lost faith and became upset?He will give up trials and never make it. To sum up,an optimistic attitude toward life is significant to all of us.Life is not easy,the road to happiness is always full of hurdles.We may stumble and have hardships.That's why we need a positive attitude to support us to conquer these problems and ultimately achieve the summit of success.