正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
My Favorite Sport My favorite sport is playing soccer.I remember that time,I went home and picked up a old soccer by chance.Then I played it with my good friends.From then on I fall in love with it.I always train it and play it with my teammates.I want to be a professional football player.I wish my dream will come true.