可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
1. FirstI will go for travel , and made the list in my booknote: Shanghai,zhejiang province and Anhui huangshan. As you know , Shanghai is morden and beautiful city , it has advance transportation and special Chinese Traditional shanghai culture. i love this city 2. Second,I love reading, and i already bought some books for holiday, reading help me to know new knowledge and different history ,different culture.If i know many kinds different things ,i must be great person after graduation, different knowledge make me be more nice and beautiful 3.Third, it is last but not least.I will study dancing, i like the feeling of dance, people become a nice angel when they are dancing, it is amazing What you will do after exam? i really want to invite you come and join me if you are free. Best Regards Chatty
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