小学二年级英语作文:Our house

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例。

our house Our house is not big, but it is full of love. In our house ,there are father ,mother and me.House is located in the country,it is not rich but it has more warmly than the city. There are three trees in the yard,three big rooms in the house.The red big door is in the front of the house. Listen,now the house is not quiet ,because it is time to have dinner ,we,three people is around the desk ,we are so happy!