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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33573
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

用户练习作文:

Many students would like to save money by collecting coupons,looking for group-buy deals and buying clothes when in a sale.In my view,these ways are reasonable.I support these methods. The reasons are as follow:frist,we are students and have little money because our main duty is studying.We have to spend the time in studying and have no enough time to earn money .So we should take some methods to save our money.Second, the behavious of saving is the traditional morality.As a Chinese,I think it's my obligition to obey our traditional morality. All the things are caculated.A penny saved is a penny earned. In conclusion, i consider that we can save money through these ways.

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