2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown. I'm very excited. and I'll take him to my alma mater. That's a wide and beautiful school. and a row Osmanthus tree in the side of playground. The Fitness equipment in front of the ground.The pool is side of the Fitness equipment,we could watch the fish make some small bubbles.a little leaves are falling frome the tree. The school is full of my smiling and growing, and is also cultivate aducation place. I love there forever!