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As an English represent , I am worrid about the situation that many students lose the belief of studying English . However, learning English is very of importance . On the one hand , English is one of the most subjects , we have got to learn English to get grades . On the other hand , if we are good learners , we will learn about the ways of quantities of tools . Nowadays , we will never leave English. So , to improve English , we can follow the following suggestions . Firstly, we can recite words by using vocabulary to gain a great basic . Secondly, practicing speaking and writting to get a wonderful habit . Last but not least , it is evident that learning western culture to add up the interest. Looking forward to building a surroundings where every stdents love learning English.