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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6620
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
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如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

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How to improve school safety Nowadays, more and more events which influence students'safety come about. Many students receive hurt even campus don't be peaceful any more. Parents and teachers are not only shocked but also worried. So, how to improve school safety. There are many useful suggestions. Importantly, students are supposed to build safe idea that what to do and what not to do.What's more, security guards should try their best to charge the safety of the campus. Last but not least, teachers can teach students the influence of bad events. Then students will chage their minds to use talking pacefully to solve their problems each other. Because of th geart effords, students can learn knowledge safety and have a safe life.

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