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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Hello, Mr David Smith: How are you doing This is Wanghai ,assistant of sales.Firstly ,thanks for your purchiasing the shirts which are 100 boxes. Second ,we suggest that carton is better than wooden box, because ,carton is lighter than wooden box, it means one container will load more using carton than wood box.Then the cost of shipping is cheaper.And our another customer that American company choosed carton for this order,and it is very good How about your opinion, waiting for your reply with many thanks Best Regards Chatty
