2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

At the last Mid-Autumn Day, when you bought a box of cookie in the supermarket, the seller packaged it into a bigger box, and then put it into another box. In the end, the girl gave me a beautiful bag. In fact, in order to compass supermarket owner's object they must package product. And then they will be on excessive packaging. Because customers always like beautiful thing, businessmen have to package their product. I think that to waste. So I have a piece of advice to customer: please refuse to buy excessive packaging thing. And give a suggestion to those businessmen: please don't excessive packaging product.