托福独立写作模拟题:关于金钱

文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误。

I had considered this question before i read it on the test, and my opinion still not changed. I think if you want to make large amounts of money, you can never earn enough, because your definition of large money will become more and more follow your ambition grow. And during this time, you can't feel satisfied.If you have family, maybe you pay most of you attention on money not your family. Thus you may lost more, such as a wonderful time spend with your family. So i support the second opinion, just earn a comfortable living. have a not so big but full of love house, not eat expensive but lovely food ,sometimes have a nice trip.You will have a lot of time do what your truly want do,you may make so many money, but your life is enriched. As a Chinese ancient says: you can't bring the money to your grave. Money become meaningless to you after you died. Life is short, we shouldn't waste time earn extra money, why don't we enjoy satisfied life now.