托福独立写作模拟题:关于金钱

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

I had considered this question before I read it on the test, and my opinion still not changed. I think if you want to make large amounts of money, you can never earn enough, because your definition of large money will become more and more . And during this time, you can't feel satisfied.If you have family, maybe you pay most of you attention on money not your family. Thus you may lose more, such as a wonderful time spend with your family. So I support the second opinion, just earn a comfortable living. have a not so big but full of love house, not eat expensive but lovely food ,sometimes have a nice trip.You will have a lot of time to do what your truly want to do,you may make so much money, but your life is enriched. As a Chinese ancient says: you can't bring the money to your grave. Money became meaningless to you after you died. Life is short, we shouldn't waste time to earn extra money, So why don't we enjoy satisfied life now.