2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Dear Yan Yufei, I am writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my congratulations to you for you have just graduated from Fudan University and got a job in Jinghu Company. After years of hard and creative study,you finally achieved your goal.Therefore,I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition.Indeed,no one could have been more deserving than you,as you have done your utmost to progress.On the other hand,for me,it is a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded.In short,I take pride in your present success. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations again.Wish you still further success. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei