2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival, a traditional festival for Chinese people, is celebrated on August 15th in lunar calendar. It is said that The Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated to memory Chang E, a beautiful woman who has to leave her husband to moon after eating drugs by accident. During the festival, families gather together, eat moon cake and enjoy the full moon. Besides, people visit their relatives and friends,and they could travel to other landscapes. Those activities demonstrate Chinese culture and its deep history. As a Chinese, we should continue our ethnical culture.