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Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位，概括和分类仔细审题，就某个问题写一篇感想，或就一个事件进行阐述，解释以及论证自己的观点，列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 大量的钱可以使我们过上更舒适的生活。
2、 金钱只是物质交换的工具，满足舒适的生活已经足够。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；注意文中个别的句子错误；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
as we know, we can't live without water,just like we are can't live without money, .a lot of money can make ourself spend a good life,but everyone has diffierent concepts,on the hand , I think enough money is ok for me，because i am alone at shenzhen ，i can spend enything whatever i want ,and i enjoy it .on the other hand ,some people thinks the more money the better，They never meet the situation，that’s all i say
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