2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

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Report Xing Guang High School held an activity to climb Daqing Mountain on April 10th. Students were informed to gather at school door at 9:00 am with carrying necessary objects such as water bottles, blankets and snacks. When students got to the destination, the local guider lead students to climb the mountain and tell the legends of these area, which was so interesting for studtents.Some students took the photos of these brilliant landscapes, Other students played some activities on the top of mountain. At the time of lunch, students sat on the ground and took all their foods, sharing their stories. Laugh and sound were full of the whole mountain. It is a signficant activity for students to develop their spirit of hardworking and practice their adaptabilty. February 20, 2016