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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3579
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文中衔接词丰富;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

the pie chart shows the preferences of choices in fast food of teenagers in United States. It is obviously that most teenagers prefer to choose hamburgers, pizza and french fries. Among these three kinds of fast food, 33% of teenagers tend to choose hamburgers and 26% will pick up pizza while 22% go to french fries. As for the fried chicken and tacos, relatively fewer teenagers are like to choose them. There is 9% for fried chicken while 7% for tacos. Only 3% of teenagers like to have sushi.

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