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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达灵活丰富，希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
Along with this prosperous and fast-spaced world, there some issues are notifying the human race, for example species extinction, air pollution and land degradation etc. As these problems, caused by us, are putting sand in the wheel of the balance of whole ecosphere, more and more arguments and conflicts emerge in the society. In the essay, both of attitudes will be discussed with my personal view in the end. It is never too late to do anything right, which is a general principle in our mind, and it is also applied to environmental protection. Why should we put efforts in saving the air, land, aniamls around us？Becasue it would be impossible for us to live in the world if it were not for the protection we get from the whole environment. It would be not only having no clean air to breathe, but also no flocks and herds to feed on us, no drinkable water when we are thirsty and no fuel to run the whole community, not even talking about development before saving ourselves. It is too late when we realize that there is difficult to find at least a place to be inhabited. So, before we ruin our life, the only thing we can do is to protect our common Earth as much as possible, from ordinary people, enterprises to governments. However, some opposite power from the communities above are dominant, as they are holding the main economy in the society.Following the green method means reducing profits as well as increasing expenses from materials, machines to the end delivery, that obviously goes against their money-driven and utilitarian goal.Luckily, however, not all hold this short view, most are positively participate in environment protection even under the pressure of bussiness reorganising. Clearly, I agree that it is our obligation to eliminate harms to our motherland and it is never too late as long as we do it from now, right now, by controlling veichle exhaust, using environment-friendly goods, saving water to reduce personal" carbon footprint".Moreover,on a larger scale, agreements like Kyoto Protocol, an agreement about cutting back carbon dioxide emission, should be applied generally. Based on everyone's care, it will not long to bring back the lovely and beautiful Earth we had before.
