作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear Tom, I am quite pleased to write to you. I want you to help me to sell these Chinese Konts made by me recently since you open an online store. With the symbol of safety , the Chinese knots will enjoy great popularity in your country. Chinese knots have different size, usually, it is about three cm