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题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
As phones become more and more permeate in people's daily life,some are convinced that phones will kill letter writing.As a matter of fact,I strongly doubt this view. To begin with,letter writing is a traditional way of contacting others which have lasted for hundreds of thousands of years.People have read about letters in both ancient and modern poems and tend to be really addicted to the beauty and romance hidden in the letter and the addiction is so deeply rooted in people's hearts that it can not be easily erased. What's more,phone calls can be of great expense,especially between different provinces and countries,which can not be affordable to everybody.In that case,people tend to have a preference for the relevantly cheaper way of communicating---writing. In a word,phones cannot take the place of letter writing despite their increasing popularity.What we should do is try to accept both of them to make communication easier.