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My hometown,RiZhao,which is a beautiful city and it situated in the East of Shan Dong province,nearby the sea. There are many interesting places for foreign freinds to visit,such as The Sun Square,where is nearby the sea and you would have a good view in there.There are also many hotels and restaurants around,which can offer comfortable room and delicious and cheap sea food including prawns. As far as i am concerned,some small islands are aslo pretty chioce.You can go to there by ship,and it will be impresive.Taking a boat is an interesting active and you will be very fraid if you can not swimming in the sea. At the end,i am looking forward your coming.
