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My hometown,RiZhao,which is a beautiful city and it situated in the East of Shan Dong province,near the sea. There are many interesting places for foreign friends to visit,such as The Sun Square,where is by the sea and you would have a good view there.There are also many hotels and restaurants around,which can offer comfortable rooms and delicious and cheap sea food including prawns. As far as i am concerned,some small islands are also pretty choice.You can go to there by ship,and it will be impressive.Taking a boat is an interesting thing and you will be very afraid if you can not swim in the sea. In the end,I am looking forward to your coming.
