2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，同时请注意单词拼写的检查。

The mid-autumn festival falls on the 15th august of lunar calendar. As one of triditional festivals, how far we are or how busy we are , wo will come home celebrate the activity. with the moon up,we sit together to share our stories and eat mooncake. especially,we enjoy our selfives by travlling and having a trop to our relatives.