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Nowadays human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species, More and more animals and plants are instinct or going to disappear in this earth, one reason is that in order to pursue economic benefits, people killed animals or plants to get some expensive parts to make money. but the lessen quantity of animals and plants has affected human's life. on the one hand, they are human's friend,on the other hand, human's such activities has destroyed the ecological system on the earth. So we must take actions immediately to fight with these activities, like establishing protection zone where all animal can be saved well and hunting is forbidden, and so on. What is more important, people's awareness about the protection of animals should be raised through education and positive publicity.
