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2015年高考作文优秀范文:平凡工作

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:32浏览次数:1718
要求:
  阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
  To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend ,painting the house or digging the garden。
  What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the Job they are doing .It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something !
  Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized, No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs。
  [写作内容]
  1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
  2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法,内容包括:
  (1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛;
  (2) 假如没有清洁工,环境会变得如何?
  (3) 你对平凡工作者的看法。
  [写作要求]
  1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
  2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

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Every kind of job plays it own particular role in our society, no matter how ordinary it is. The cleaners keep our socity tidy and clean.Their work is so hard. They get up early to clean the streets and sewers and to pick up garbages. In order to let our city look beautiful all the time, they can not go home until most of people are home. No mater it is rainy or snowy, they have to work outside. Without them, the plastic rubbish would fly in the sky, the street would be filled with all kinds of garbages, the disgusting smell would come from sewers. Although cleaners are ordinary workers, they still contribute their efforts to this socity, we should respect them from our heart.

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