文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
Every kind of job plays it own particular role in our society, no matter how ordinary it is. The cleaners keep our socity tidy and clean.Their work is so hard. They get up early to clean the streets and sewers and to pick up garbages. In order to let our city look beautiful all the time, they can not go home until most of people are home. No mater it is rainy or snowy, they have to work outside. Without them, the plastic rubbish would fly in the sky, the street would be filled with all kinds of garbages, the disgusting smell would come from sewers. Although cleaners are ordinary workers, they still contribute their efforts to this socity, we should respect them from our heart.