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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5537
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Nowadays ,many families only have one child ,parents treat their child as princess or prince ,they do not need to housework at home ,they spend their parents' money .I think they will not live well without their parents. So parents should help their children to be independent , first children should make their little room clean and tidy ,they will fell comfortable and sleep well .second they need to learn cooking ,it is important to everyone we cannot always buy something to eat .third children should learn make friend , in this world we are not along ,we need friends’ help and comfort ,also we share happiness with our friends ,good friends make our life beautiful . Children should learn to be independent ,their parents cannot help them forever .I just show some advices to parents and their children that hope they are useful .

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