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Nowadays ,many families only have one child ,parents treat their child as princess or prince ,they do not need to housework at home ,they spend their parents' money .I think they will not live well without their parents. So parents should help their children to be independent , first children should make their little room clean and tidy ,they will fell comfortable and sleep well .second they need to learn cooking ,it is important to everyone we cannot always buy something to eat .third children should learn make friend , in this world we are not along ,we need friends’ help and comfort ,also we share happiness with our friends ,good friends make our life beautiful . Children should learn to be independent ,their parents cannot help them forever .I just show some advices to parents and their children that hope they are useful .