高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章组织结构良好；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

my home town is small town, Then peoples is kind and nice. The river is clear, fish in the water play. The town house is very beatuiful, house walls spread on many colour, is like rainbow. But at the time change, this is gonna. right now my beatuiful home town is tall buildings, ori