2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):Health

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。

Health is far more important than wealth. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. To stay healthy, we should bear some fundamental principles in mind. Firstly, it is very important for us to keep a balanced diet and eat plenty of fruits and vegetables because they can provide us with rich vitamins. Secondly, we’d better exercise every day to keep fit. besides, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Most importantly, we should develop positive attitudes towards life and take an active part in communicating with others. Meanwhile we should understand and respect others and be tolerant as well. In conclusion, if we follow the above advice, it’s very likely for us to lead a healthy and happy life.