高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文章衔接手法恰当；从句偏少，建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆。

My hometown is a small town,and the people here are friendly. The river is clear, fish in the water play. The town house is very beautiful, house walls spread on many colour, is like rainbow. But at the time change, this is gonna. right now my beautiful home town is tall buildings. The new town would have been unrecognisable to original inhabitants. The river is not clear, the fish in the river was less, who make the town become so bad?