高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章衔接手法恰当；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；从句偏少，建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆。

My hometown is a small town,and the villages here are friendly. The river is clear, fish in the water play. The town house is very beautiful, house walls spread on a lot of colour, is like rainbow. But at the time change, this is gonna. right now my beautiful home town is tall buildings. The new town would have been unrecognisable to original inhabitants. The river is not clear, the fish in the river was less, who make the town become so bad?