高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章衔接手法恰当；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累。

My hometown is a small town,and the villages here are friendly. The river is clear, fish in the water play. The town house is very beautiful, house walls spread on a lot of colours, is like rainbow. But at the time change, this is gonna. right now my beautiful home town is tall buildings. The new town would have been unrecognisable to original inhabitants. The river is not clear, the fish in the river was less, who make the town become so bad?