高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章衔接手法恰当；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累。

My hometown is a small town,and the villages here are friendly. The river is clear, fish in the water play. The town house is very beautiful, house walls spread on a lot of colours, is like rainbow. Nonetheless at the time change, this is gonna. right now my beautiful home town around is tall buildings. The new town would have been unrecognisable to original inhabitants. The river is not clear, the fish in the river was less, who make the town become so bad?