高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章衔接手法恰当；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累。

My hometown is a small town,and the villages here are friendly. The river is clear, fish in the water play. The town house is very beautiful, house walls spread on a lot of colours, is like rainbow. Nonetheless at the time change, this is gonna. Right now, around tall buildings by my beautiful home town . The new town would have been unrecognisable to original inhabitants. The river is not clear, the fish in the river was less, who make the town become so bad?